Glamour Magazine usually covers things like how to thin your thighs and how to make your man love you more, but this article by Eve Ensler (author of the Vagina Monologues) surprised me for many reasons, and not just its placement....
Women left for dead—and the man who’s saving them
So, first of all, the title. Why does it always have to be a man trying to save women??? I'm glad there's someone out there working for women, but why would a feminist like Eve Ensler phrase it this way? I'm guess this was an editorial decision.Here's the first paragraph of the piece. I've put the first straight-out-of-Joseph-Conrad -sentence in bold.
I have just returned from hell. I am trying for the life of me to figure out how to communicate what I have seen and heard in the Democratic Republic of the Congo. How do I convey these stories of atrocities without your shutting down, quickly turning the page or feeling too disturbed?People SHOULD be disturbed by what's happening in parts of Congo. But saying "I've just returned from Hell" is a little much - a little too much of promoting the paradigm of Africa as the Dark Continent for my taste.
The article goes on a bit, introducing the main character, a doctor who sews up rape victims, and then says:
It is not too strong to call this a femicide, to say that the future of the Congo’s women is in serious jeopardy.I can't disagree, but I think her way of going into this is a little off. Stick with me, and you'll see what I mean.
But you have to go back further than 1996 to understand what is going on in the Congo today. This country has been tortured for more than 120 years, beginning with King Leopold II of Belgium, who “acquired” the Congo and, between 1885 and 1908, exterminated an estimated 10 million people, about half the population. The violent consequences of genocide and colonialism have had a profound impact on the psyche of the Congolese. Despite a 2003 peace agreement and recent elections, armed groups continue to terrorize the eastern half of the country. Overall the war has left nearly 4 million people dead—more than in any other conflict since World War II—and resulted in the rape of hundreds of thousands of women and girls.Okay, it's great to give some background, but you can't jump from Colonial times to 2003.
The next part of the story describes the hospital and the horrific things the women have undergone; I'll leave the commentary out for this section and leave you to read it.
But then, here's where my problems with the article start again:
I stay for a week at Panzi. Women line up to tell me their stories. They come into the interview numb, distant, glazed over, dead. They leave alive, grateful, empowered. I begin to understand that the deepest wound for them is the sense that they have been forgotten, that they are invisible and that their suffering has no meaning. The simple act of listening to them has enormous impact.Yes, listening in a powerful tool of healing, and I'm sure the women were glad to tell their stories and think the world would hear them. But I think it's a little much to call them "grateful" to Ensler; they're probably grateful to have their fistulas sown up and have meals to eat. They're grateful to have company as well, but this is too much of the mzungu coming in for a week to grateful responses for my taste.
And then this gets really over the top for my taste:
I sit in on a typical operation in a clean, safe, but seriously underequipped operating room (nurses use torn pieces of a green dressing gown to tie the woman’s ankles to the stirrups). I am able to see the fistula—a hole in the tissue between the woman’s vaginal wall and bladder. A hole in her body. A hole in her soul. A hole where her confidence, her esteem, her spirit, her light, her urine leak out.It's important to communicate the seriousness of fistula - but what about instead of talking about "light leaking out" discussing incontinence, or being expelled by your village for incontinence? Or any of the other physical, psychological and psycho-social side effects that go along with fistula?
This seems more important to me than something metaphorical. But then again, if you're starting off with a metaphor of coming from hell, maybe you need to stick with the metaphorical.


7 comments:
On the heading ... well, because it's a man saving them.
On the Africa-is-Hell stereotypes: she's just being an American.
On her portraying herself as Super(wo)man: she's just being an American.
You know, it is probably because you have just started paying attention to this kind of thing. Those of us who have grown up watching the world talk of us as though we are starving are already used to it.
It is exactly what I would be doing, saying, recording, writing, reporting, if I had been an American brain-washed by a steady pounding of government propaganda on all media outlets: We Live in The Great Ideology's Paradise - See What the People Outside Are Living In!
Forgive her even as I and I do. She's just an American.
sometimes i think 27th, even while trying to be objective, does not realise that his views sound as though they are being fueled by emotion. and emotion can easily blind one to the important issues. i think there are some americans who feel for africa more than the likes of the communist or even many africans themselves. its not helpful for us to chuck people out before we have even heard what they have to say.
and @ Glenna, i have just read your journalism school personal statement. Girl, you just made me ask myself again why i write and i realised i have to come to a definite reason. mine are too many too trivial compared to yours.
@Phantom: Yeah, sometimes I slip into hyperbole and wild, stupid generalisations, and I realise some hours after posting that the basic idea being communicated gets washed to the side by that ... but I leave it in, even when I could have edited or noted that the above should be taken with a pinch of salt, so that my comment history is a true representation of even the evil brusqueness that I may control in other situations. So, I am not particularly happy about my inability to fashion words diplomatically. :o(
Few things... Sorry I didn't respond to all of this sooner. I've been off blogging for a day or two, which I know is unusual for my prolific-blogger self, but you know how it is...
Anyway, 27, EVE ENSLER is not the TYPICAL American. She wrote a really great piece called the Vagina Monologues that really went beyond stereotypes and the surface of issues and caught something essential about how women relate to their sexuality worldwide. The point was, I expected more from HER. Not from Glamour, not from an American, but from HER.
Also, 27, but JUST saying she's an American, you're discounting all of the specifics of my argument about the article rather than engaging with its rights and wrongs. You should look at things more closely before discounting them completely. That's what makes people think you are a reactionary.
Phantom, not sure exactly what you're getting at with my personal statement, but more on that to follow...
@Scarlett: Yeah, I am reactionary, actually. Almost proud of it. :o) I mean ... I am.
Anyway, my point there was that just nearly any American you pick up from anywhere will write the same way Even Ensler wrote. It is not about Even Ensler alone. I look wider.
Her play, the Vagina Monologues, came over here. And we banned it, after heated debate. Check the Monitor archives.
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im wondering where i can find the original text of the article?
please let me know
beckie_cherniak@hotmail.com
thanks
I have only one comment - with regards to "returned from Hell". It's a beautiful country, Congo. So is Rwanda, so is Uganda - heck - Africa has got to be the most beautiful place on earth - not just because of it's landscape, but because of the people and the diversity and the cultures. I'm an African - proud to be, and I've been doing some work in the Congo. I have to disagree with you because for the women there, it is hell. It is hell on earth and it is honestly impossible to conceptualize the kind of evil going on there. It's not human - and I don't have much faith in humanity after the stories I've heard working with women there and in Northern Uganda, but even with my tiny shred of faith in what makes us inherently human and compassionate, what's going on with the women in the Congo is as much a hell on earth as hell could possibly be. (and I do believe in hell - the fire and brimstone kind - so I don't use the term lightly). If there's an African, an American, an Asian - anyone who can go there, hear the stories, see what it's like and come up with a different word that sums what it is like for many women in Eastern Congo right now, I'd LOVE to hear it because when I did, that was the only word that came to mind. If her words can bring someone's attention to the situation there, I pray they do - no matter how slanted or skewed we perceive them to be, because people do need to sit up and take note of what's going on in Eastern Congo.
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